» Comics - Perhaps he should have said "request"... - November 12th, 2011, 11:53 pm

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Shadow has been hibernating for 50 years....

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XxOskarxXTBXx51, November 12th, 2011, 11:56 pm ( Reply )

Episode 3 is up! - Constructive Criticism please!

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Reminds me of Insonicnia.

posted by Josephk on November 13th, 2011, 8:02 am





 
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@Josephk
It is heavily inspired by InSonicnia!

posted by XxOskarxXTBXx51 on November 13th, 2011, 4:04 pm



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I suggest using speech bubbles, also the text is slightly hard to read.

But good job.

posted by TheTurbo on November 15th, 2011, 12:04 pm





 
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@TheTurbo
The panels are too small, and the text is too big.

I'd rather not have bubbles.

posted by XxOskarxXTBXx51 on November 15th, 2011, 3:59 pm



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